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MOM!
Currently studying at the DAVE school for animation.
2 Weeks
Daughter is worried why her mother gave her an alcoholic beverage.
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Some good ideas... Interesting angle and placing of the characters... But the movements are exaggerated at the wrong times... Beware of the speed...
Ariyanto Zulkifli
Nice set up. But, the timing and spacing is off. Some reference will help you get the right timing and spacing.
Keep practicing. :)
Rachel Col
The mom's motions in the beginning are amazing! It's a bit too fast when she drinks though, and maybe do some more movements with the eyebrows/expressions? Great work though
Sabrina Winkel
Lip sync is good the only thing I would say is the daughter. She's looking down the entire time. She has no facial expressions. Try to make her look up at her mom
Marcella D.
Facial expressions could be worked on a bit more, I say 90%
Fernando Incetta
Looks good, and I like the composition a lot. Work a little bit harder on the blocking stage before going into splines. Congratulations
Monica Stringer
the drinking action and the kids reaction at that moment are, awkward, not good enough to say why, but theirs just something off there