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Mother Daughter Time
halfway through an animation associate degree
about one week
A mother and daughter share a friendly drink.
Comments
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Ariyanto Zulkifli
the pose too stiff and too much camera movement. try to learn more principle of animation, you'll get better.
Sharkhead
Not ready
Marcella D.
Awkward camera, and character movement. Please don't use flashing lights (unless they are at a party).
Gaucelm De Villaret
Uh, what's with the weird flashes and zoomouts? Even then, the movements are repetitive and are barely expressions.
Fernando Incetta
Lacks animations principles, and the montage is really weird. There's no point in cutting between similar shots, and the flashy white transitions makes it worse. Keep it up!
Terence Staples
Needs alot of work.