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Crazy Conversation

by Alejandro Villapudua Salas

Final Rating: 2.39. Finished #280 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

No, I'm just learning the basic principles of 3D animation

Time Taken

Approximately 8 hours

Description

In a small supermarket a girl asks another if a drink has alcohol, it is a bit surprising that a poorly recognized , but it takes good and gives advice.

Comments

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Brennny

i don't get it?

Sarah Schulze

Be careful with the camera angle.One time your character is on the right side and an other time he is one the left side, by doing that he viewer will have some difficulties to understand what^s happening, espacially when you have character which looks the same :)

Connor Leuck

breaks the 180 rule

Sabrina Winkel

It's good except the camera moves too much

Marcella D.

Keep working on this one

Sanmi

lol

Richard Adams

Most obvious thing, too many camera shifts, distracting.

Gaucelm De Villaret

Oops, audio cut! Anyway, the expressions are too lacking... and the movements too lacking...

Ariyanto Zulkifli

timing and spacing. need to improve that to makes you better.