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Coconut Juice (WIP)
by Guia Longasa
Student (Junior) animation major. Intermediate.
Less than two weeks? Though I wish I have time to work on it a bit more.
First timer going into a Hawaii themed bar. Done in TVPaint.
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Sorry to say this, but this is incomplete. The audio file is cut, you have put some effort in the first seconds, this had potential with your art but it became a cinematic afterwards... And ended too prematurely! Sorry.
Steve Schwartz
The mouth shapes look right and timed well but the audio seems off. It looks great so far, and I love the storyboard drawings at the end. Competition aside, I really hope you finish this.
Marcella D.
Work with the audio
Foster Eber
I think the animation may be 30 FPS, that may be why it didn't match the lips too well.
S J Bennett
Didn't encode right?