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My first time at a Club

by fernando aramburo

Final Rating: 2.30. Finished #286 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

Im student

Time Taken

like two days

Description

Hello everyone,, I am a student of animation and I am new to the 11secondclub.

Comments

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Deanna Keogh

The cameras are too far away - we cant see whats happening animation wise. Expect for that last one... that camera move was a bit unnecessary

Marcella D.

Need more movement from the Max rigs, and why do they have their eye's so wide?

Fernando Incetta

A good starting point. Do some research on the 12 principles of animation and build from there. Good luck

Connor Leuck

The camera is too far away after first cut.

Ariyanto Zulkifli

too floaty. the timing, spacing and staging is off the mark, in my opinion.