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Alcoholic Mom
by Eric Raffle
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Michael Whitley
I love your idea with POV, very creative. That being said, the "daughter" (the viewer) seems as though her view is on a tripod and very mechanical. Also you should work on your rendering i noticed an issue with your lighting try and mess with your decay rate a bit so you will have smoother lighting.
Deanna Keogh
clever idea
David Wevill
I like the idea but I think maybe a little more emphasis on her offer would have improved this, like if she had gestured towards her fridge or handed her a bottle.
Marcella D.
Not Bad.
Jordan Lewers
Very interesting idea with beautiful lighting! It would have be nice to have seen some lead-up before the girl asks about the alcohol though
Connor Leuck
The camera move at 140 happens at the same time as an action of the mother. You might delay that or not make it so extreme.
Miele
I love the first person perspective!
Gaucelm De Villaret
Cool set-up and idea, but it is not as expressive as it might be.