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wedding party
by Vahram
The girl and her aunt are invited to the wedding party.
Comments
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Andrei Llacuna
The background in the first scene is too even, try placing the objects (trees and the tables) in a random position so that it will look a bit more interesting to look at. :)
Marcella D.
Not bad.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Quite there. Fitting. There is something lacking, but I can hardly say what... maybe it lacks... depth? A little bit more complexity? Anyway, it feels appropriate enough, but it could be more...
Ariyanto Zulkifli
really nice. top 10.
Rakesh Modi
Acting choices are nice. The staging/framing of the shots could have been better. Current compositions are not helping the performance to reach the audience effectively.