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The Alcohol Conundrum
by Tiffany
Suspicions arise when Mother offers Honey a drink.
Comments
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Sabrina Winkel
Needs a lot of improvement. I need to see more from the other character and more facial expression from the mom
Sharkhead
It needs better timing, and you could also exagerated it a little more to get more beautiful poses and silhuets.
Marcella D.
The eye's are definitely not having any reacting to the situation. Please, use the rig's eyes to your advantage.
Sarah Schulze
The Idea is there, I like it. You may want to work more on the lipsync :)
Charlie Abb
Decent animation. Story is a little bland. Great background.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Although it's too bad we hardly see the daughter, the mother emotes well enough. There is a good balance of expressions, in my opinion.
Mark Hanson
boredom defined
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Jelany Andujar
great job. but the only thing that throws me off is in the beginning when she moves the cup forward, move that frame a little behind before the audio begins
Monica Stringer
the headshake could be faster and the expressions can be more exaggerated, but good work :)