« Back to March 2016 Competition
Drinking in the House
A sketchy and a wee unfinished animation of a mother and daughter discussing alcohol rules in the house.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Keely Imai
The planning of the action looks solid. I might recommend trimming the number of camera shots down by 1 at least; it's kinda jumpy for an 11 second time frame. Otherwise, good!
John Michael Wilyat
This needed more time to develop.
Marcella D.
Not bad
Coleton McMillan
This animation kinda confused me at first. I watched it quite a few times and took some time to really decide how I felt about it. You have captured a lot in such a simple animation. The facial expressions and lip sync really help round out the minimal movement to sell the animation as a whole. The only thing I noticed that could really improve upon the already excellent animation is showing both characters and how they react to each others statements. In the current state the characters simply feel separated and the words don't feel directed towards anyone until the end. But nice work overall.
Gaucelm De Villaret
There is a good set-up, but there is not enough finished stuff to give a definite judgment.