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"La Caba del Telo"
Animación de una madre cool e hija adolescente
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Goodness... That fast camera movement... Jumping from a character to the other like that is uncalled for... It's got well enough idea execution for what you were thinking of, but it is kinda unfitting and lacks expressions.
Sabrina Winkel
Remove the facial bars!! Fix the camera!!
Marcella D.
I have no idea what is wrong with the rigs, but-at least with the camera- try to work on your keys properly.
Kevin Cooper
The camera is going crazy. You'll want to keep your audience focused. It's hard to do that with the camera jumping around. Let them clearly see your performance. Do a little research on camera shots and 2-person dialogue.
Richard Adams
Weird camera movements is distracting. And characters don't look feminine.
Alex E.
WHAT.
WHAT IS HAPPENING?
What is on their jaws?
That camera swoop is really jarring, too.