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Any Alcohol in This?
by Joas
About a year as a student; no professional experience.
A few weeks, on and off between classwork.
In this house, it's always happy hour.
Comments
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Daniel Bielawski
Sorry , It might be me being stupid but the gag is not clear.
Connor Leuck
Pretty smooth
The camera cuts are a bit much
Marcella D.
Not bad
Gaucelm De Villaret
This is more weird than creative... disregarding this, the expression and body language is a bit too stereotyped/simplistic to give some depth of appreciation.
Fernando Incetta
Nice job. The camera-work is a little confusing., there are a lot of cuts and some shots look off balanced. You have some interesting poses going on, try to work a little more on your physics and it will look so much better. Congratulations





