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Mom and Daughter
Mom and daughter luckily escapes an accident while driving.
what will be the Daughters reaction after the incident ...
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Ruth Agada
haha! Love it.
Sharkhead
Good! But still needs some improvements
Fraser Page
Great animation, funny story too. Loved the little part at the end. The one thing I feel needs improvement is the lip sync. Facial expressions are great.This one should definitely win!
Sabrina Winkel
Very well done! Story line was amazing! But the beginning was a little ununderstanding but for sure a winner!
Syed M. Ali
Cool..
John Michael Wilyat
The animation is great on this, but honestly the story is distracting. Why would a character say "this" about an object in someone else's hand. It feels forced and unclear.
Marcella D.
Not bad
Gabriel Areia
AMAZING!
Sarathbabu A S
nice animation, I like the, the action of that daughter realize the smell of alcohol. and mother facial expression is nice,
Michael Kristiansen
Nice story :) And well done animation.
Mike Schanbacher
Nice work. Hope to see this top 3. The only beat that stood out to me was the head turn from 50-65...it felt a bit linear and like it could use some downward arc in it. Other than that, great stuff!
Pablo Arderíus
Awesome! I know who's gonna win this month:)
Gaucelm De Villaret
Kudos for the little morality tale. The animation itself is very serviceable. It is quite moderate and believable. Maybe it could use something a bit more crazy, or maybe not. But hey, it is very good execution on its own.
Robert Firestone
Awesome!
Fernando Incetta
Good work! Great facial expressions, and cool interactions between the two of them. You could work in mom's lip sync a little bit more but that's just nitpicking. Congratulations
N I Naiem
Nice Idea
Ariyanto Zulkifli
Woooow!! TOP 3 for me.
very nice idea and animation.. one of the best in my opinion.
just the opening, i think that orange bandana girl need to pinpoint that she is talking about the drink that the other woman drinking.
Can cause misunderstanding by the audience.
Really nice btw! Keep it up.. :)
Richard Adams
lol
Sagar Katara
nose animation in the beginning is too much. Loved it though.
Velid
Good work! :D
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
very nicely done...like the story a lot
Kevin Cooper
Great piece. The last eight seconds add to the story, but honestly, I felt like it wasn't needed. I was able to understand pretty quickly that the driver is a hypocrite.
Bokang Koatja
Almost missed the little nose sniff in the beginning. Maybe a little body movement to aid it? And the lip sync gets a little lost at "If you're gonna drink..." Other than that its full marks from me :) This is awesome!
Nawaz
WOWW!! Well done buddy!
Rakesh Modi
Nice work!!!
Joaquin Casas
One of my favourite, so fluid.
Eugene Ooi
this is awesome!