« Back to March 2016 Competition
"Confusion"
by Jabir Dz
Interaction between JANE and her MOTHER. she looked about her in confusion..
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Craig Joseph Massa
Love the movements of the characters! VERY well done.
I think the camera moves around a bit too much though... Disorienting at times. I think the scene would have been fine if there wasn't any cuts, just the 1 scene.
Jordan Lewers
You have a really good grasp of fluidity in your movements, particularly when the girl on the left punches Bonnie's cheeks! Bonnie, however, rocks back and forth a bit too much in the beginning, with the poses feeling redundant
Gaucelm De Villaret
Characters are more like bouncing and moving from one pose to the other quickly... feels unnatural and kinda forced.
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui
nice work
Ed Purves
Looks like the girl is in The Life Aquatic outfit :)
Naveen Mohan
Excellent timing and acting..keep going
Fernando Incetta
Good work! It needs tome tweaking here and there bit overall is a solid piece of animations. Congratulations.
Kevin Cooper
The camera cuts are distracting. They disrupt the flow of the piece. Keep the viewer's eye focused on your action.