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Two Co-Workers
by Bhupender
Description
Two person were talking in office. They both knew each other from long time and a short part of their conversation is shown in clip
Comments
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Brett
You need some ease-in's and ease-out's, everything feels very robotic. Also try not to "cross the line" it's a bit jarring.
Brian W.
Stick to fewer POVs.
Jaheer
Good effort. Need some more observation. For your kind information try to take care about Look at, Follow through and better Gestures.
Bivek Dawadi
very good