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Life is a risk
Description
Is about two men talking about something they are going to do
Comments
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Josh Brazda
I think the characters should be reversed as the guy on the couch isn't barging into anywhere. A little more work on the lip sync could have made this a little better also.
Lea
Your camerawork and editing here makes no sense. Maybe study that a little before trying to get all fancy with it, no offense.
Carolyn Merklein
i barely see the first guy when he's talking, that jerky camera move is bizarre.
Lia
what happend with the cameras?