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Italian problems
The Italian brothers are fighting over the same woman!
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shark
so so.
Howard Cameron
Oh geeze haha!
staging is perfect!
but sadly the same facial expression is what breaks the believability. This is still really good!
Brian W.
Fun, but very limited. Not much animation going on. Good artwork.
John McSwiggin
Not sure what to make of this... Good animation none-the-less.
Sabrina Winkel
Haha this is funny! Very unique and creative but please make it appropriate for audiences. You can get I trouble for that
Frank Geadah
lol!!!
Kinnei
I'm sure someone will have said it but . . . The rules, "Copyrighted . . . character designs will not be allowed in entries unless the entrant has the right to use the . . . design" also, "Don't use anything overtly offensive (this is not the place for crude sexual humor . . .)"
As for the actual animation I would really like to see more movement and more facial expressions - exaggeration is key. You have good drawings and understand basic motion, which is a good starting place.