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Argument

by manijackson

Final Rating: 3.55. Finished #133 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

manijackson

Experience

Student

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Two people are arguing.

Comments

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Carolyn Merklein

gestures are very robotic. They are appropriate, but they don't flow naturally from one to the other.

Rhian

perhaps less poses would make the animation more dynamic - listen to Glen Keane animationpodcast.com - he talks about how the viewer has one particular pose left in their memory so you need to make it a good one