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ye barging in hiya
Nothing much to explain here , just some
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Howard Cameron
Not sure if they would BOTH be smiling at the end of that last line.
Brian W.
Good structure and consistency. Keep at it.
Debby Albers
Still in blocking phase, and a lot of the keyframes need timing adjusted, especially when he says "you" at the start, because right now it's very confusing who is saying what. The emotions for the character on the right change way too much as well, fuming angry and then smiling the next second. I'd definitely come up with a story/motivation first, based on the audio file. This will help you clear up emotions/personality for the characters and what's going to happen. Definitely a good effort though!
Carolyn Merklein
this is a acceptable wip of the audio, but the characters kind of feel like they're just going through the motions of script with no personality outside of the moment.