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suspicious man
Description
A suspicious policeman-wanna-be, checking up on warehouse nearby when he heard screaming.
Comments
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Howard Cameron
Much better
John McSwiggin
Good story
Felipe Navarro
the end was good, unexpected...good animation.
Vin Liew
not bad, timming could be better.
Lea
Overall pretty nice, but the 'barging in here' feels off. Seems like you're missing a B-shape on the lips.