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A CRIMELESS INTRUSION
by Hammad Hussain March Competition Winner
A tiny conversation between a light-minded boy and some convicted smuggler.
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mdsyd
Wow! winner spotted.. in all aspects.. Awesome!
rizwan
Toper !
shark
it will be a winner!!
Khursheed Alam Khan
Nice....!
Howard Cameron
Where he says "Barging" seems a bit late. Aside from that perfect.
I like when the guy with the cigarette sizes him up
mohsin
awsome!!
umair
great job..
Debby Albers
Characters give off a really strong sense of personality through their actions and facial expressions. Lip sync could use a bit more refining, but a great piece overall
Bivek Dawadi
very good
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui
Winner !
Shiladitto Gupto
Nice job.. expecting this to be on the top five.. if not between first second and third.. the only thing which I noticed is the continuity break when the character clears the smoke.. in the previous shot the hand was down but suddenly it went up..
Farman memon
wow it looks great. finally I like it
Ismail Ahmed
Great Animation
Frank Geadah
Great stuff, puff seems forced and fast though, although I see what you were going for.
Syed Atif
Well Done..
Its one of the best short I have seen.
Congrats.
Abdurrahman Zhukov
Winner!
Lea
Love that you used the exhale at 190 for exhaling smoke. Great shot overall :)