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Training Camp
Someone wants to start a training camp with his roommate
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padel
nice idea
Zach Savaglio
It's good, but I think you should try a higher frame rate. I'm guessing 12 or 15 FPS? Also try smaller movements. I love the stop motion style though! I'm looking at your mouths, and yes, they are decent, I would look at this link. You can draw out your own mouths, or digitally draw them like what you did here.
https://imgur.com/yEq6IZv
Jesse Smith
This one is really good, smooth, and simple nice work.
Fernando Incetta
Pretty good, the lighting is consistent and the setup is well done. The framing in shot 2 is a little off, put the character on the right, there is no need to see the empty patch of grass.
Tasha Howe
Sucker for a lego animation. Like the hair adjustment, even though it is a restrictive process I think the timing of the side to side/back and forth movements could be more refined to give more impact to the speech and suggest movements /actions even if they cant actually perform them. Worth shooting some reference footage to see how your body moves then reflect that as best you can with your figures