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Phone Call
Description
A man talking with someone on the phone
Comments
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Zach Savaglio
Good work! Maybe a cut to the other voice would help!
Howard Cameron
If you kept the camera the same from F63-F225, the should would be fine :)
Fernando Incetta
The animation is not bad, but the staging is all over the place. You don't need that many cuts, specially if they are so subtle (read about the 30 degree rule).
There is nothing in the audio that implies that the other guy is in the phone so you should have emphasize it more or work around it.