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Living Negotiations
by A.J. Baldwin
Two robot bums, Dash and Bulk, are debating on where to stay and make plans for the next little while.
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Zach Savaglio
Very nice work! For the purple guy, I'd like to see lip sinc. It makes the animation more fun to watch.
Fernando Incetta
Not bad. If you are going to use just a few poses, try to convey as much character as you can in those. The big guy pose is very standard, standing straight, feet flat on the ground.
Ruben Uggla
I think it's really well drawn, just wishing there was more motion in it.
Tasha Howe
Nice detailed designs, however, I think that maybe the reason why their bodies don't move very much, a lot to re-draw! Poses are ok but the animation is actually getting from pose A to pose B which there isn't a lot of, unfortunately.