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Your spot
by Gordon Fong
Simple animation for some practice
- Used the Malcolm rig
Comments
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Andrew Ball
Good work
Zach Savaglio
It's good to have both characters in the shot. I must say, I am glad to see that when voice 2 was talking, voice 1 kept moving, even if it was just a simple blink or head shift.
Fernando Incetta
Animation is not bad, but it doesn't seem to be a reason for leaving the other guy off-frame.
Shantanu K
Individual acting is good, but another character would have been much better included
Leo Leung
Pretty good. I would try to show more thought and progression. There's a nice moment when he says : but you walk around naked, I can feel the thought coming out. But theres no progression from one feeling to another, and its nice to see that progression if you compare the first pose to the last one
Christopher Wasp
Blinks are too fast.