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Clown College
Description
Trying to convince your friend for help is a lot harder when you're a goof.
Comments
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Jason Daves
Add pauses to emphasis the action and to add contrast.
Zach Savaglio
Saw this on your youtube channel! I would work on some of the movements, as some are rather choppy.
James Daggs
The overall animation is pretty decent and the characters are plenty expressive. However, I think the framing feels a bit too close to the characters. It just needs a better layout and it would be really solid.
Raevynne 'Mei' Vile
Wow! I love that camera spin near the beginning! I like the idea that they are clowns. Keep up the good work!