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to the old school

by alicia obredor

Final Rating: 2.48. Finished #136 out of 139 entries.

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Animator

alicia obredor

Experience

student 11 months ago

Time Taken

one and a half weeks

Description

they are two characters that go in a car and go talking

Comments

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Zach Savaglio

Very choppy movements. That's the first thing you should work on.

Fernando Incetta

I'm taking that this is a WIP so I won't look too far into the animation. What is with the framing? There doesn't seem to be a reason to have them off-centered.

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile

Interesting character choice! I hope you finish it!

James Daggs

This is clearly unfinished. It just looks like you uploaded the rough key poses, added a low resolution backdrop and nothing else.