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Fetching Competition

by Jake Hetzel

Final Rating: 5.29. Finished #38 out of 139 entries.

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Animator

Jake Hetzel

Experience

4-5 years

Time Taken

about 3 weeks

Description

I decided to take the approach of two old pals discussing getting back into competitive fetching.

Comments

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Howard Cameron

Looks like most of the time was put into Buttons. Nice work on him.

The Dog however is rushed, his paws are floating off the ground.

Ruben Uggla

I think him stepping quickly back again, in the end, was unnecessary.

Fernando Incetta

Not bad. The staging is good and the characters convey proper personality. Lip Sync should be way more exagerated according with how snappy the rest of the animation is. Try to animate the dog's body at least a little, specially in strong beats like the "No!" at frame 210.

Julie

The movement is very fluid!