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Fetching Competition
by Jake Hetzel
I decided to take the approach of two old pals discussing getting back into competitive fetching.
Comments
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Howard Cameron
Looks like most of the time was put into Buttons. Nice work on him.
The Dog however is rushed, his paws are floating off the ground.
Ruben Uggla
I think him stepping quickly back again, in the end, was unnecessary.
Fernando Incetta
Not bad. The staging is good and the characters convey proper personality. Lip Sync should be way more exagerated according with how snappy the rest of the animation is. Try to animate the dog's body at least a little, specially in strong beats like the "No!" at frame 210.
Julie
The movement is very fluid!





