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shiwaiyundong

by kongxiaoyuan

Final Rating: 3.84. Finished #83 out of 139 entries.

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Animator

kongxiaoyuan

Experience

a student

Time Taken

one year

Description

because sport is so happpy

Comments

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Zach Savaglio

Some of the movements are too jumpy. If you want to have fast movements, I would add a few more frames.

Fernando Incetta

A little bit too snappy, it's a little distracting. Specially in the guy with the moustache.

James Daggs

While expressive, their overall movements don't really match the tone of the audio. The animation is far too quick for the dialogue.

PRINCE

doing too many things at a time
nice try