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开展训练营

by FanXinghao

Final Rating: 4.50. Finished #66 out of 139 entries.

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Animator

FanXinghao

Experience

I just a student

Time Taken

1year

Description

a1要去a2家开展训练营,a2不同意,起了争执。

Comments

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Fernando Incetta

The staging is good and easy to read. The hand gestures of the guy in blue seem a little random, try to make them clear and less IK-ish.

Shantanu K

It's pretty cool, but it can be more interesting, hand gestures are repetitive, try exaggeration of expressions

Leo Leung

i would act out the scenario with more different and contrast personnalities and exaggerating them

Christopher Wasp

Animation has a dead start to it. The arm movements are locking into place when they move and also the lip sync is off. Pretty good work though.

FanXinghao

perfect.