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Bug

by Manoj kumar

Final Rating: 4.02. Finished #76 out of 139 entries.

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Animator

Manoj kumar

Experience

first 3d animation i have done

Time Taken

15 days

Description

two bugs talking about the training

Comments

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Ryan Hill

Interesting scene and character concept. Try to avoid stiff movements and sliding feet. At frame 70, lift the green bug's left foot when taking a step. Their poses can benefit by adding stronger changes in their body's shape and weight/balance.

Fernando Incetta

Lacks animation principles, and facial animation needs a lot of work. Keep it up.

James Daggs

The animation itself is decent, but character expressions aren't that great, and I notice that as soon as the characters finish their lines toward the end their faces seem to be moving back into their default positions.