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Paperboy begins training
by Murat Sari
Description
A little Paper boy asks his grandpa to help him train to become stronger. The little paper boy brought a sack filled with his belongings tied to a stick.
Comments
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Zach Savaglio
Some of the movements could use some work, like the beginning jumps.
Fernando Incetta
The style is appealing but the acting doesn't reflect the audio clip. It feels like you could swap the audio with any other dialogue and it would fit as well.





