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Crisis stress
by Nicolas leal
Description
my first animation
Comments
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Hadas Rosen
You're starting to het some cool acting and staging in there, but your cuts are all over the place! Keep it to 1-3 shots for something of this length!
Mostafa Barakat
Very Blocky and no lip-sync.
Kimberly Holbrook
Way too many cuts that disorient the viewer. It makes it difficult to watch the animation itself.
Elisabeth Janerka
A shame it is so poorly lit. Keep it simple and maybe don't have lights in the scene
Natj
There could be a bit more lighting so it's easier to see the characters.