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Mental Issues

by Joab Torres

Final Rating: 5.50. Finished #42 out of 283 entries.

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Animator

Joab Torres

Experience

6 months

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Just my first entry

Comments

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Eric Bai

cup hand feels dead at times
no weight to the cup
too many beats need to simplify for instance, dips spoon in cup takes out and immediately dips back in only to pull out again
make your actions deliberate

Laajaj Nassim

up and down too exagerated in the begening....and maybe try to work your rythm and accents..everything is moving all the time...

Sasa Rodrz

Good idea, just try to maintain a big pose and animate secondary actions within that pose, a lot of movements distract from the audio and you can't read the character