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The Breathtaking British Bloke
2 years in 3D animation and 1 year in 2D animation.
3 weeks.
I am a student, studying Animation, looking for my work to be critiqued to help further my practice.
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Jamie F
Be careful of too much twinning.
Daniel Miller
The pose on frame 115 could be turned to the side a little more. This would alleviate some of the twinning in the arms on "...created me. You did."
Eric Bai
not enough time for the motion you have at the end
acting choices of the back character dont seem believable
front guy is good
talha bin khalid
Like your variations
Mostafa Barakat
A lot of poses with the guy in the back would definitely tone him down more.
Gokul Dev
floting
Laajaj Nassim
It seems that you try too much to use some principles of animations to draw your posings, maybe should try self video reference for more subtle and credible acting, a bit less exagerated...the character on the left is better i think...
but even when he moves his arms (fr 78), you should try less "overlap" and more credible (realistic) acting, i think...
Sasa Rodrz
try not to put a pose per frase,
Henry Barbee
Poses are too big, too different from one another on the cop. A pose doesn’t have to completely change from key to key. Something as small as lifting a hand or turning the head is enough to make the next pose feel unique. The whole body does not need to change each time. Good work though, you’re getting there!