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Dark side
A ghostly double appears..
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talha bin khalid
Nice
Gokul Dev
nice :-)
Felicia Martin
I love the exaggerated animation of the blue character. Overall, this piece contains appealing poses with clear lines of action. The follow through of the legs (around 30 frames) of the blue character is well done and enhances the fluid flying motion. When the blue character moves to the left side of the other character (around 50 frames), I recommend adding more follow through on the legs (like the first flying motion discussed above) to make them appear less stiff and really push the narrative that this character is swiftly flying around the other character. I think the action of the blue character crossing his arms is very effective and strong. To make this piece even stronger, I recommend adding more animation to your characters' fingers (especially the non-British character). I would also add at least one blink to the non-British character during the closeup shot. Great work!
JordanJenkins
love the flow of the blue chartacter