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British Conscious
by Jakin King
A unfamiliar voice in one's head can go a long way to calming one's nerves.
Comments
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John M
A good start but no lip sync or second character severely lets this down.
Hadas Rosen
The volumes change every frame, and a two frame breath cycle isn't enough for it to feel right. Don't be afraid to draw a lot!
Divina Gracia
drawing is good, but the animation needs more improvement. maybe you can add lips movement and eye expression rather tahn just moving his shoulder
Charlie Rose
I like the character design quite a lot, but it really should have been six different frames.
Elisabeth Janerka
Nice potential, but the way his shoulder tangents with the background is distracting to look at