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Absent Smile
by Maxime Gery
A lonely girl
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Pablo García
Nice acting
John Aurthur Mercader
Hey this is great! I think it would benefit more from re timing your transitions, some happen really quick and does feel partnered with the music. But i love how smooth you got this. Well done!
Michael Loeck
Great work. You repeat the same gesture with her arm out twice. I'd maybe have both arms on the ledge for that first moment to keep the attention on her face rather then the arm gesture. Then lead into the crossed arm pose. Otherwise very nice!!
Carlos Guadarrama
Super nice performance! I think the only thing that feels off is her walking at the beginning. Try toning down the up/down and the drag on her head, make it super subtle and I think this one will be a really good addition to your demo reel. Super nice poses too.