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And so the day begins
by Miguel R. C.
Mum and daughter say goodbye to each other in the front door as the day begins...
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Daniel Vasconcellos
Good idea, executoin needs polishing!
Keep it up!
John Aurthur Mercader
Hey this has great posing. And your inbetweens are on point. But could really benefit from more blocking before hitting spline.
Jamie F
nice stuff - i thought the walk down the stairs was a little off. but otherwise nice!
Carlos Guadarrama
Timing and spacing is good, I'd change the way she goes down the stairs her legs look funky. And I'd work on the expressions they feel like there's no change.
Lucia
the eylid on the kid is off
Elisabeth Janerka
Nice setup but the girl's walk down the stairs need work. Her stride is way too wide and she is bending her knees way too much