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Don't be late
by Evie
Description
A mother waves goodbye to her daughter as she leaves for her final day of high school. However as the mother reminisces her daughters running late and isn't looking where she's going.
Comments
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John Aurthur Mercader
This is a great start, you got your story telling poses in with a few inbetweens, could use more archs and some squetch. Also try and push your poses further. Taking video footage of yourself, or just having a mirror handy helps a bunch.
Joshua
Could have been smoothed out, but otherwise funny and nice.