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Broken Wings
by Stephen K
Description
A deformed bird and a dog make an unlikely friendship whilst being stuck on a desserted island.
Comments
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Catalina Montelongo
I liked the first camera angle from the bird’s perspective!
Cody Cessna
The bird is having a slight issue with believable weight. It feels like it's hopping in slow motion, or that it's full of air. I think it would have looked right with a more pronounced wing flap.
Good acting choices and interpretation of the clip.