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Don't Touch My Pie

by Hunter Yoak

Final Rating: 3.33. Finished #102 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

Hunter Yoak

Experience

6 Months

Time Taken

40 Hours

Description

A spider leaves out a piece of pie as a reward for mending socks. When she sees a fly land on her plate, she threatens him with a swatter.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Richard Adams

Lacks fundamentals. Go study up on "The 12 Principles of Animation" on Youtube, will help your work a lot.

Christian Stewart

Try to add more expression in the characters.

Dan Boot

love the concept but needs more lip syncing or body emoting