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SHOPPING TIME

by QI JI

Final Rating: 5.66. Finished #27 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

QI JI

Experience

3 years of college

Time Taken

one week

Description

Stop pissing off women when they buy clothes

Comments

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Christian Stewart

Try to get more movement in the other person when they talk.

Predrag Lazic

The head turn feels a bit over articulated.

Ben Zingo

pushing/exaggerating the guy's boredom/exasperation at the beginning would help motivate her turning around/reaction. Some really nice motion here though!
When she first turns around though, it feels a little stiff, like there should be some overshoot/settling after she whips around. Pointing directly at him, instead of upwards, might also help it feel more direct and aggressive