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《rest time》

by arong

Final Rating: 5.34. Finished #36 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

arong

Experience

Still studying in College

Time Taken

5day

Description

Don't disturb the rest time of reading

Comments

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Matthew

Appreciate the fluid motions! Try to use all effects in the sound clip to help tell a story with the scene!

Ben Zingo

the timing, motion, and acting all seem great! But seems like you could push some of those key poses a lot further, and don't forget to rotate the neck!
The lipsync also feels a bit like flapping the jaw, don't be afraid to move that mouth around & be expressive! Those head shakes are really nice!