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The Homosapien
by Jared
Description
A guy talks to another guy about another guy.
This is the first 3D animation I made with audio. Feedback is appreciated. I definitely have some things to work on.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
Some nice bits here, but if feels very pose-to-pose and a bit stiff. Remember to add in anticipation, overshoot, etc!
Anthony
Not a lot to see. Characters are rigid. The movement of the appendages is tied too closely to the speaking. If he isn't talking, then he isn't moving either. This is especially obvious during "little does he know". The hand/arm stops between each word, and it's just unnatural.