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"Homo sapiens"
In a near future, a science class happens.
"Bones" rig provided by:
Digital Creator School
Comments
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Seamus Mullan
Really like the movement in this one. I'm going to criticise the movements chosen for some actions, as they don't seem to line up with the narrator, but regardless of personal choice it is well animated
Marie-Lou
The animation is fluent, that's great. I think the yellow guy moves a lot for... nothing. I think you could have done a close-up so we can focus more on his acting and his lipsync rather than his entire gesture. But your walkcycle is great. Maybe you could have make the chair turn later in the beginning, it's a bit fast for my eyes :))
Eden
Good job! Nice animation
Anthony
The main character movements are fluid, but the poor lip sync is a major detractor. I think you would have been better off not doing it, as it does take away from the overall product.