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《Miss the bus》

by Jingyi Ren

Final Rating: 3.73. Finished #97 out of 126 entries.

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Animator

Jingyi Ren

Experience

two years and a half

Time Taken

two weeks

Description

none

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Marie-Lou

Hey, good wok !! The animation is fluent :) I don't know if you had a problem of exportation but your audio is a bit out of sync. When the boy moves his arms (from frame 90) it's a bit shady. We don't know exactly what he wants to convey with his acting. And the other guy waiting for the bus is a bit sudden in his movements. Keep going !