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Ordinary and Consciousness
by huyuanqi
Description
Although Jack is a bar waiter, but he is particularly fond of reading and watching movies in his leisure time, often in the bar to enligh10 confused customers, until her appearance, make them panic.
Comments
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Deniz Serra Göksu
i love the poses you decided to do. sometimes his wrist breaks though, I think you should focus on the hands and keep them as natural as possible.
Seamus Mullan
I can see what they were going for, but it seems like it got left in the "block out" stage of animation
Eden
The arm was totally dislocated and the camera movement was uneccessary, but nice try!