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Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective
by Yixin
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10 seconds 2d animation video, worked on TOONBOOM Harmony.
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Jay
Love the expressions and characters! The narrative is clear, and while the animation could use a few more frames, the energy is there and clear.
As a point to work on, I'd just be careful with the 180 rule, especially when moving into the two shots between the main characters from the bed POV, as it may help improve the readability of your shots.