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A Casual Break-In
by Bryce
Description
Reese looks in his living room to find Joan casually laying under a giant hole in his ceiling.
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Susannah N.
Pretty good! One thing I noticed is the knife took too long to get to the wall. It might work better if it was already in the wall when it changed the shot over to her.