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How Did You Get In Here? Window?

by Patricia Elma Tjokro

Final Rating: 4.54. Finished #100 out of 193 entries.

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Experience

2 years of experience

Time Taken

1-2 weeks

Description

A mummy realized that someone had entered his apartment.

Comments

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Joshua Barcenas

I like the posing you used at the start! The full effect of looking out the window is a nice added touch connecting the dialogue to the action, but I think the choice to pan past the wall may have been a bit jarring on the viewer. I like the idea though, and I really liked the squash and stretch used on the character expressions!